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He
likes dance. He has short hair. He often changes the color of his hair. But in
my opinion, brown hair is more suitable with his face, it makes more handsome.
He has oval face with flat nose. Although he has flat nose it don’t make ugly
in his face. He has long legs.It is very useful when doing dance.
Although dance often hurting his body but making happy. He also
can sing. His voice very pure. When singing ballad song, his voice very
melodious. But he isn’t confident with his voice. He is more confident when doing
dance than singing. That’s all about my favorite actor. He is name is Kai.
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Dog. It is animal that usually use to guard the house,
except security guard. Dog will barked if they meet a strange people.
So, it used become guard. Dog has a sensitive nose, it can find a specific
thing easily. Dog is also very obedient to his owner. They do all the command
of his owner. Dog is faithful animal than others animal.
I don't find any participles in your paragraph. make sure your paragraphs write by your own sentences. you are not allowed to copy paste
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